Check this for some mistakes?

rachel and amanda are cousins they both go to the same school Mrs snapdragon is there teacher she teaches year too both girls are good students rachel likes mathematics the best amanda is very good at write stories one monday a strange thing happend it was a afternoon both the girls had forgotten they're homework books they came back to school to get them but nobody were a school the poend the door quietly do you know what they saw chalk desk rubber and ruler were doing a dicaation the chalk was writing the words on the blackboard were where the sticky tape and duster the girls asked the glue and scissor but they did'nt nobody new where they were outside playing sports and doing exercises

Check this for some mistakes?
whats your question
Reply:DER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reply:What point are you trying to make? You illiterate moron.
Reply:Aside from no punctuation, appalling grammar and spelling mistakes you mean? I get the sneaky feeling this is homework...?
Reply:Rachel and Amanda are cousins.


They both go to the same school.


Mrs Snapdragon is their teacher. She teaches 'Year 2".


Both girls are good students. Rachel likes mathematics. Amanda is best at writing stories.


One Monday, a strange thing happened. It was one afternoon and both of the girls had forgotten their homework books. They came back to school to get them, but nobody was at school.


They opened the door quietly. Do you know what they saw ? The chalk, the desk, the rubber and the ruler were doing a dictation. The chalk was writing the words on the blackboard.


Where were the sticky tape and duster ?


The girls asked for the glue and scissors, but nobody new that they were outside playing sports and doing exercises.
Reply:Rachel and Amanda are cousins.


They both go to the same school.


Mrs Snapdragon is their teacher. She teaches 'Year 2".


Both girls are good students. Rachel likes mathematics. Amanda is best at writing stories.





One Monday, a strange thing happened. It was one afternoon and both of the girls had forgotten their homework books. They came back to school to get them, but nobody was at school.


They opened the door quietly. Do you know what they saw ? The chalk, the desk, the rubber and the ruler were doing a dictation. The chalk was writing the words on the blackboard.


Where were the sticky tape and duster ?


The girls asked for the glue and scissors, but nobody new that they were outside playing sports and doing exercises.
Reply:Rachel and Amanda are cousins. They go to the same school. Mrs Snapdragon is their teacher.She teaches year 2. Both girls are good students, Rachel like mathematics the best and Amanda is very good at essays.


One Monday a strange thing happened.It was the afternoon, both girls had forgotten their homework books, they came back to school to get them.





what is poend ???
Reply:Ive already done it once for you when you asked earlier. I didnt have to do it for you, whats wrong with my previous answer without having to ask somebody else to do it too.
Reply:ok ty for points
Reply:Rachel and Amanda are cousins, they both attend the same school. Mrs Snapdragon is their teacher, she teaches year two. Both girls are good students, Rachel likes mathematics the best and Amanda is very good at writing stories.





One Monday, a strange thing happened. It was an afternoon, both girls had forgotten their homework books so they came back to school but nobody was at school. They opened the door quietly and do you know what they saw? Chalk desk, rubber, and ruler were doing a dictation.





The chalk was writing the word on the blackboard... where were the sticky tape and duster? The girls asked the glue and scissors but they didn't know where they were. Nobody knew they were outside playing sports and doing exercises.
Reply:do u need help with your homework if so get some1 2 help u 1 2 1 if u have me 1 let me no %26amp; i'l c what i can do
Reply:Just wasted time Reading.......well trying to read......and making sense of terrible punctuation and spelling paragraph!


So I deserve 2 point if not the 10 points!
Reply:Full of mistakes
Reply:Rachel and Amanda are cousins. They both go to the same school. Mrs Snapdragon is their teacher. She teaches year two. Both girls are good students. Rachel likes mathematics the best. Amanda is very good at writing stories.





One Monday, a strange thing happened. It was an afternoon; both the girls had forgotten their homework books. They came back to school to get them but nobody was at school. They opened the door quietly. Do you know what they saw? Chalk, desk, rubber and ruler were doing a dictation.





The chalk was writing the words on the blackboard. Where were the sticky tape and duster? The girls asked the glue and scissors but they didn’t know. Nobody knew they were outside playing sports and doing exercises.








I've changed it as best I can-what the heck was it? Some parts I guessed at 'cos Ireally didn't have a clue what was going on!!
Reply:Rachel and Amanda are cousins, they both go to the same school. Mrs Snapdragon is their teacher, she teaches year two. Both girls are good students; Rachel likes mathematics the best and Amanda is very good at writing stories.


One Monday afternoon something strange happened, the girls had forgotten their homework books, so they came back to the school but nobody was there. They quietly opened the door and do you know what they saw? The chalk, the desk, the rubber and the ruler were all doing dictation from the chalk on the blackboard.


(Sorry, got lost after this bit!)
Reply:That's absolutely appauling! and very difficult to read!
Reply:So glad some people picked up on the 'knew' not new near the end.





Stupid question though - supspect having to redo poor homework attempt and we're all helping!!
Reply:yep... there are loads of them. Well done.
Reply:It's full of mistakes!!!
Reply:Your title 'check this for some mistakes?, is incorrect. Check this paragraph for mistakes.


Capital Letters, Commas, colons, semi colons, their (because it belongs to them) spelling mistakes.





What exactly do you need to know?!
Reply:I'll re-write it for you in a better way:


Rachel and amanda are cousins. They both go to the same school. Ms Snapdragon is their teacher. She teachers year Two; both girls are good students. Rachel's best subject is mathematics, while Amanda is very good at writing stories. One monday afternoon, a strange thing happened. Both girls had forgotten their homework books. They decided to come back to school to get them, but nobody was in school. They opened the door quietly, and to their amazement, they saw the chalk, rubber and ruler doing a dictation. The chalk was writing the words on the board.


Dat's all I can understand, I dont understand the rest.
Reply:FAO Bellshk





Ere?


Do you mean "were", or are you trying to catch us out?